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Profound and brilliant, if this is intended to be as symbolic as I am inferring; still very good, even if it is only about birds, which I doubt.
This requires a second reading to search for meaning of the symbolism of the destruction of the birds in this profound poem. I'd love to hear your explanation.
Wow! Excellent imagery. Profound, well-written piece!
08/06/08
Very good, I found myself wondering who the birds were standing in for.
08/06/08
Very sobering! I caught the symbolism from the first stanza.
The form was hard for me to read. But, maybe with the theme of the poem, it shouldn't have flowed smoothly.
Thank you for writing this.