The Official Writing Challenge
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08/03/08
Good story. In the third paragraph, I think Nora and Eve got mixed up. Nora should have listened to her intuition. Good descriptions.
Thanks.
This was an interesting story. You should make sure you proof read before you submit and I'm not the sharpest knife, but I missed how this relates to "Concentration?"