The Official Writing Challenge
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08/03/08
Good story. In the third paragraph, I think Nora and Eve got mixed up. Nora should have listened to her intuition. Good descriptions.
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08/05/08
This was an interesting story. You should make sure you proof read before you submit and I'm not the sharpest knife, but I missed how this relates to "Concentration?"