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Funny and sad. It's hard to concentrate on talking with God while doing something else. Our time with Him should be just that. Good story and something to keep in mind. Nicely done. Thanks.
Ha!! This kind of thing happens to me often! I think this is why God often allows Satan to "sift" us, allowing rotten things into our lives so that we've no where else to turn but Him, desparately seeking Him and growing closer to Him as we do. I noticed the subtle and direct connects between each distracted thought. Most of them were centered on money worries, which is where my mind often goes. I loved this all the way up to the ending, which seemed rushed. An ironic twist of events at the end to punctuate your point would be great! : )