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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Concentration (07/24/08)

TITLE: A PASSING THOUGHT
By Rebecca O'Connor
07/28/08


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Once I thought a thought but the thought wouldn’t keep
It left me quite suddenly and out my brain did seep

I knew what I was looking for down on bended knees
Went out the door, got in the car, while inside were my keys

Got from my desk, walked down the hall, important was the task
When I got there t’was my despair forgot what I should ask

Into the store I rush to go to get just five things needed
Came home with seven, missing two, but almost succeeded

Too many thoughts crowd my thinking; in a daze I go
So I zig-zag as I walk I’m sure that it must show

I thought a thought, but it escaped my thinking and I knew
That this might be another day of walking off eschew

So when you see me passing by in deepest meditation
You’ll never know I’m out about seeking concentration!

[Eph 4:23 “And be renewed in the spirit of your mind”]


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Sunny Loomis 08/03/08
I enjoyed this, especially going to the store. I usually forget my list. Good job.