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07/11/05
The last two paragraphs were wonderful, the best part of the whole story. The first paragraph could be softened to match the end and you have a wonderful essay.
07/11/05
Wonderful descriptions. I'm sure it's hard not having had her with you longer, but it was a blessing to have her in your life.
07/11/05
I agree with the National treasure. I'm sure you found that unique area of the tie that binds a blessed relationship between mother and daughter as you walked along. A lovely memory. I get your point. God bless ya, littlelight
07/12/05
You got me in. At first I thought I was reading a travelogue. Bitter sweet memories well told.
07/14/05
Beautiful. Apart from the content, which was touching, you have a lovely way of putting things too e.g. 'a tumble of .....' etc. Well done.
I was so ready to march right down to a travel agent....then the wonderful shift to family fun....then the poignant ending. What a gripper.
07/15/05
very touching. What a nice memory. Well crafted.