The Official Writing Challenge
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07/31/08
Interesting story from the future POV. Good job.
08/01/08
I like the MC's frustrated voice. "Dried fruit does that" LOL.
08/04/08
Very enjoyable. I like the MC and his voice. Makes me want to hear more of the story!
Well come on buddy, you can't leave them floating in space. What happens if the 'restroom' breaks down? I mean, with all that dried fruit :(

I enjoyed this - I'm a space story freak. I love their method of navigation - a bit like "second star to the right and straight on till morning". Loved the wry humor throughout. Great story, Dub. :)
I really liked this. The underlying humor was delightful.