The Official Writing Challenge
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07/31/08
Interesting story from the future POV. Good job.
08/01/08
I like the MC's frustrated voice. "Dried fruit does that" LOL.
08/04/08
Very enjoyable. I like the MC and his voice. Makes me want to hear more of the story!
08/06/08
Well come on buddy, you can't leave them floating in space. What happens if the 'restroom' breaks down? I mean, with all that dried fruit :(

I enjoyed this - I'm a space story freak. I love their method of navigation - a bit like "second star to the right and straight on till morning". Loved the wry humor throughout. Great story, Dub. :)
08/06/08
I really liked this. The underlying humor was delightful.