The Official Writing Challenge
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07/31/08
Very nice generational story. Kind of surprised to find a pup appearing half way through. Enjoyable. Thanks.
I think Gordy and the pup were working together to get Grandpa's concentration away from the cards. Nothing like a pup wanting to play to get your attention. Just goes to show that a little kid and a pup can sometimes outsmart a Grandpa. Great story and dialogue was very real. Well done Helen with your first entry in Level 3.