The Official Writing Challenge
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07/24/08
Neat flow. Well done.
07/26/08
Love the meter of this - just right! A great read.
07/26/08
The short lines and the quick rhythm are perfect for this piece. I really like this!
Delightful rhythm, rhyme, and ideas.
07/29/08
I sure enjoyed the snappy meter in this rhyme. My favorite part--the bit about all the offers from marketers. (How amazing--what a surprise) Do I detect a hint of sarcasm? LOL This is fun to read.