The Official Writing Challenge
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07/24/08
Sooooo good, it gave me goosebumps at the end.
07/26/08
Absolutely excellent characterization for all three characters (SO hard to do in just 750 words!) and a great story with a PERFECT ending. Wonderful.
07/26/08
I loved this piece. I wish all of us knew Jesus this way. Our time will come. p.s. I do know HIM this way personally, I trust you do too.
I agree that this is soooo good and made me have goose bumps at the end. It's just a wonderful story.