The Official Writing Challenge
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07/25/08
What an outstanding story. I've got tears rolling down my face, and yet this wasn't a soppy, sickly sweet tale. It read as a real-life snapshot of a person's life, the time marked by the advance of technology & the changing family dynamics. Beautiful. The best story I've read yet on this site!
07/27/08
Unique story. I like the progression to the modern phone and the generational view. Very nicely done. Thank you.
Congratulations for writing an absorbing, original tale on the history of the telephone. Considering word count restrictions, I don't know how you managed to tell so much in so little time but it's all in there. And Elspeth is just as real as she can be. Awesome!
07/29/08
This was outstanding! How soon we forget the strides technology makes, and the way that affects our lives.