The Official Writing Challenge
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Cute story! I appreciate a happy ending. Don't forget to start a new paragraph each time you quote a new speaker. Also, it's pulpit, not pull-pit. Otherwise, well done! Keep up the good work.
07/26/08
Nicely done. I was a little confused by the scene change from the night to Sunday morning, but it was an enjoyable story!
07/27/08
You never know who God may want us to help. Nice story. Thank you.