The Official Writing Challenge
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I really liked this. The title had a good ring to it, if you'll pardon the pun. The way you gave the phone box a persona reminded me of "I, Robot." A bit like "If walls could talk" but with a much more positive twist to it.
I hope this scores well. It deserves to.
Interesting angle and I like the "important" calls - without preaching at us, you've shown what is most important, love.
A different POV. So many people with all kinds of daily diversions. We all need to focus on our Creator. Thank you for this piece.
Wondefully creative--my favorite part is the poignancy of the telephone trying to imagine a possible "back story"--it may be a very intelligent, reflective phone, but it will always lack that spark of the Spirit that makes spiritual knowledge possible. And I really liked that in just the tiny snippets of conversation that you gave us, we can fill in whole histories of relationships. Well done!