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07/25/08
Powerful story. I wonder if this is based on a real-life experience? Be careful with generalisations though - maybe not all of African nations' laws are corrupted and manipulated. Maybe you could have used something general like "this country" or even "this African nation". Regardless, it was all the more real and dramatic for its horrible conclusion. Sad, but true.
07/26/08
This had a punch. We should be thankful we live in this country. Always trust in the Lord, not in man. Thank you. Well done.
A very sad story. Nice writing. I hope it isn't true. May God Bless you!