The Official Writing Challenge
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07/24/08
Ohhhh, a mystery! The lesson is right on. Well done.
07/26/08
Oh so creative and engaging. Love the idea, and the message here. Wonderful voice too. Great stuff!
07/27/08
Great suspense, but with a lesson built in, too. I love it!
07/28/08
This is so good, I don't know where to begin. I love a mystery, and this is spooky. Of course, you hooked this reader completely. And, you worked in such a wonderful message along with the MC's shifting emotions that it all felt chillingly real. And, I loved the ending. Sure would like to know how The Voice did what he did!
07/30/08
I thought at the beginning it was going to be a God thing... but wow... it was really frightening. Especially as you know someone who actually has this happening. Sheesh.
07/30/08
Oh my goodnes! Go ahead and scare me to death! This was a great story and I was glued to my screen! You're good! Kudos!
07/30/08
What a powerful story. Your conversations were so real that I felt that I, too, was "eavesdropping". :)
07/30/08
What an eerie story but also an amazing one, too! Thanks for sharing...
Laury
07/30/08
The suspense, the eerieness, the message--all just right.
07/30/08
Oh my. This gave me goosebumps. Made me actually look over my shoulder before typing this. Wow. What a story. There is so much inside of here, really awesome writing. The details, the characters and the message. just wow. ^_^
07/30/08
What a scary situation! Makes for a good story though! Good job in the telling.
07/30/08
What an impact of a lesson! Mysterious and intriguing. God using a mystery caller, to stop one from gossiping... AND to encourage others.. wow!
07/31/08
Whoa! This sent chills down my spine. How creepy, and yet the ending was awesome. I liked the moral of the story. God is always watching us, so we need to be careful what we speak. Excellent story!