The Official Writing Challenge
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07/25/08
Fascinating - so much going on here. I THINK I understood most of it - the juxtaposition/battle between the logical and the emotional/spiritual. This feels like part of a much longer work. I hope you will share/write it some time.
07/31/08
I had to read this one a few times over to get it, but when I did I was in awe... the creative mind it takes to write this is out of this world, in another time! :) Loved the wife's intutition, and how the story of redemption fit in with even a phone call... Great writing... makes me think in another realm and I like that!
Very creative! You had me thinking and contemplating throughout. We really can't conceive what the Father has in store for us, can we? Thanks for the inspiration.