The Official Writing Challenge
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07/25/08
Wow. This is heavy duty. I'm glad at the end the man calls upon God. Good job.
Excellent job capturing the haunting, sad atmosphere.
A wonderful and creative story. Your writing created great suspense. Flowed very well too.
07/30/08
Wow! Powerful stuff going on here. There is lots of suspense and mystery in the air as to what is going to happen next and what's really going on. Gave me the shivers, it was very realistic. You did good with the details and the ending, especially. I was hoping that he would've found someone to help with the phone calls, but you left it open for more. Nice job! ^_^