The Official Writing Challenge
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06/14/05
Again -Wow (been saying that a lot this week!)
06/15/05
The words and intent of your poem was very good. However, the rhythm was missing. But if what you had to say meant more, then you did well.
06/16/05
Good job! This poem tells an awesome story. A poem doesn't always require rhythm, and this one worked just fine without it. Keep up the good work!
06/17/05
Interesting approach to the poem.