The Official Writing Challenge
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07/24/08
Is this a true story? If not, wasn't the dream more from beyond the grave than the phone call?
You left the reader wondering about the supernatural with the mystery in your story.
07/25/08
Love the ending. He is so much bigger than that "little box."
07/26/08
God does speak to us in our dreams and tells us of things to come. I have no doubt this was one of those times.
Great story: Caught my interest and held it from the first Word!!