The Official Writing Challenge
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07/25/08
Oh, SO creative! You had me on the edge of my seat, and so anxious to know what the calls were about. I was absolutely captivated, and absolutely love the ending. Exceptional.
I didn't see that ending coming. Cool!
07/26/08
This was very taut and gripping and finished with a fantastic twist.
Well done.
07/26/08
I absolutely loved the twist at the end! Wonderful storytelling - a very compelling read...great job!
Masterfully written. I expected any ending other than your surprise one.
Wow! You kept my full attention, and the ending is great! Excellent writing.
Perfect story-telling, loved the suspense and the unexpected ending.
07/28/08
Very nice job! I loved the ending.
07/29/08
I had to resist the urge to peek at the ending midway through. Thanks for explaining why she couldn't just unplug the phone. Great suspense.
Okay, you held me in the grip of suspense; and then the turn of events had me pondering deeper questions of fate and destiny. Of course, had your MC asked my advise at the beginning, I would have suggested she unplug the phone. Glad she didn't ask me, as your ending was much more profound. Loren