The Official Writing Challenge
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You've portrayed great family interaction and one smart big sister in your story. Your message brought it all together well. Now, tell me really...who had called the house??
07/24/08
Great imagination.Personally I would have preferred if it ended after the sister's wink, although I can see you were trying to bring out an important message. Well done.
07/26/08
I loved this. Smart older sibling.
As the oldest sister, I loved the interaction with the girls. I also would have liked for the oldest sister to feel positive about her clever solution. You did a great job with the flow of this piece. Thanks