The Official Writing Challenge
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07/24/08
Very powerful. The emotions here are so real, and the ending is just right. Excellent.
Excellent ending to this realistic but very sad tale. I hope he followed through.
07/26/08
Interesting story and very emotional descriptions.
Your story is a well told example of "The Lord works in mysterious ways."
07/29/08
Great story. I love the ending.