The Official Writing Challenge
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07/17/08
Important story and with a theme that is way too common, I'm afraid. I am glad that your MC got the help and the support that she desperately needed!
07/19/08
A tough situation to have to deal with. Only Jesus can give true peace and comfort. Good story. Thank you.
This has to be a very difficult subject to write about. You wrote it well, and the message of hope in Christ and forgiveness of fellow Christians is an excellent one.
07/20/08
What a difficult subject to write about but you did it with great care. I wonder how many Christians carry this terrible memory burden and need to have it erased by the only One who can do it. Kudos!
A very difficult topic to write about, but you did it with a sensitive pen. So many young people have experienced the same thing and are often made to feel they were the ones in the wrong. You have done a fine job showing only Jesus can heal.
This addresses something in our society that really is a tragedy and very difficult to talk about. I'm glad your MC was able to share with the pastor and his wife. Nicely done.
07/30/08
You told this story so well, handling a delicate subject without giving too explicit details. It would be hard to fit the experience into the allotted words of 750, but you did, and splendidly...This, I hope, is an encouragement to others who may have gone through such traumas...Helen