The Official Writing Challenge
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07/17/08
Well done. Love the progressive failure of memory—how true it is!
I really enjoyed this! I liked all the details like removing a pink toothpick and the holey cheese. You have a great dry wit and it comes through in very well written stories!
Very creative!
I enjoyed the way you presented the succession of years with the memory changing. To use the quote about the difference between boys and girls' feelings about graduation tied your thoughts together just right.
07/19/08
Very enjoyable. I like how it came full circle for the MC at the end.
07/19/08
cute and clever! I like how it came full circle, and your use of the "boys different than girls" quote to tie it all together. Enjoyed this!
07/20/08
Extremely enjoyable entry. It made me smile!
07/21/08
This is adorable! Lots of fun details, a great voice, a wry sense of humor. All the things that have always distinguished your writing!
: ) : ) Indeed they are. This was so fun to read. Great job!
07/23/08
This is soooooo good! Heads will roll if you don't place high with this one! LOL