The Official Writing Challenge
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This is priceless! I was going to do something similar—now I'm glad I didn't. You did this perfectly!
Oh my, I could hear them and just about see them. Very real characters, all three of them spicy dames. Gotta love 'em.
This is delightful. Your characterization is just perfect.
Oh! this was fun and I loved the ladies. The dialogue is perfect.
Loved the title, loved the characters. Your dialogue was absolutely wonderful. Top notch job.

LOL I have a friend who calls me a "goofy old lady".
Wonderful dialogue. It is amazing how you can describe characters through what they say and how they say it!