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This is a sweet little romance, packaged together very nicely. I enjoyed it.
What a sweet, sweet story, very well told. I can relate to her embarassement about saying the wrong thing and you related that feeling very masterfully.
07/19/08
Just lovely - I definitely got caught up in this one. This felt so real. Love it.
07/20/08
I liked the ending with its promise for about making new memories together. A sweet story.
Aww I just love a budding romance. You've done a great job here with the partial memories, which so often is all we have. Loved the way William took your MC back to see her old house.
07/21/08
Oh my goodness, I laughed and laughed. For a moment I feared he was going to be Clark. ;-) Delightful story that was over too quickly.
07/21/08
I love William's example to us all. He manages to show graciousness and understanding to the embarrassed Allison while also defending and loving the "dumb" dirt eater. : ) Thanks for such vivid and concise details.
07/23/08
How sweet! I loved this cute little piece and especially the way that he didn't rag on her for a 'mistake' that certainly shows a lot of character. Great job with this! ^_^