The Official Writing Challenge
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So sweet!!! I really enjoyed the picture you built here, and the ending was perfect (especially for someone like me, looking forward very much to getting married next year... :-) )
I can tell this was a lot of fun to write. I found it almost too much to read, though--very heavy with many long words. I love the ending and the idea though, especially as one who is saving my first kiss for my wedding day.
07/21/08
Good story with imagination. This was sweet.