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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: fathers (06/06/05)

TITLE: I Remember
By Corinne Smelker
06/12/05


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I Remember…

“Mommy? Why don’t I have a Daddy?”
“Why do you ask?”
“Today at school we had to draw a picture of our family, and Megan drew herself, her mommy, her sister and a Daddy. I just drew you and me.”
I scooped up this inquiring bundle, all of three years of age, and explained that his Daddy and I split up before I found out I was pregnant with him; his Daddy decided he didn’t want to be a Daddy. “But I wanted to be your Mommy with all my heart.”
“Oh.”
“Do you want a Daddy?” I asked.
“Yes,” he lisped.
“OK. We’ll start praying for one.”

I Remember…

“Hey buddy, come into the pool.”
“Come catch me!”
“How about I stand here?”
“No. that’s too close.”
“Here?”
“No. That’s too far.” With a stomp of a little foot, “You’re so silly.”
“Well I’m only silly because you’re so cute!”
“Will you be my Daddy?”

I Remember…

Watching him half-walk half-skip down the aisle, bearing my ring, and my fiancé’s on a white, lace-trimmed pillow. His entire face beamed, and he squirmed throughout the service, like a puppy receiving unconditional love.
“Now are you my Daddy?” he asked as soon as we kissed.
“Yes buddy.” My new husband scooped him up into his arms and held him tight, winking at me over the blond, tousled hair of my - now our - son.

I Remember…

A raised hand at the end of a Sunday night service and a quick whispered conversation between a son and his Daddy, followed by a murmuring, a long hug and a wiped tear from both father and son.

When ‘the Tut” as we called him left to play with friends, I asked, “What happened?”
“Oh,” said the man who had officially adopted my son and loved him more than life itself, “I just introduced him to our Heavenly Father…”


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Sally Hanan06/13/05
Wow, a godly man is such a huge blessing to everyone.
Karen Deikun06/13/05
This was a sweet story with a satisfying ending for the child - nice.
Shari Armstrong 06/14/05
What a sweet story of an answered prayer of a young child!!!!
dub W06/15/05
Very well done, this is a story for printing. Thank you for sharing these thoughts.
darlene hight06/16/05
Loved this!
Kyle Chezum06/16/05
Good job! Very clever way of arranging the piece.
Pat Guy 06/16/05
Wonderful! Very creative way of telling this story. Well done! :)
Tesiri Moweta06/17/05
Great memories, Great piece, Great Father and great to know He'll always be there.Welldone.
Amy Michelle Wiley 06/17/05
Cool story. How wonderful for him to get a earthly dad and a Heavenly one!
Suzanne R06/18/05
Absolutely BEAUTIFUL!
Val Clark06/20/05
A sweet story, but I was a little confused with the changing points of view,