The Official Writing Challenge
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07/17/08
What a happy, sad story! Well titled, and a bit of a surprise ending. I'm venturing to say, that this MEMORY was so hard to tell, but I am glad she told her Annabelle...Good story telling...Helen
07/17/08
I like how you used the hair as a symbol through this excellent happy/sad story.
07/19/08
Perfect title, wonderful symbolism, and a tale that tears at my heartstrings. Lovely. Would love to hear more of this story.