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07/17/08
This is raw and vivid. I've read a lot of articles today, but this is the only one that moved me to tears.

He does love her. He does. It's just hard to know what love can do for its beloved when she is there but not there, gone but not gone.

I hope in time the guilt will ease.
You told this very sad story extremely well.
07/18/08
A sad story told with grace!
As I brushed the tears away, I whispered a prayer for the many going through this very thing.
07/18/08
Love the POV on this piece. I thought it was a child maybe, or some other relative, but I didn't think it was the husband. So well written, it's sad, but I can tell that he truly loves her. Nice job. ^_^
07/19/08
Excellent and poignant POV on this. This felt so real, so true. Wow.
Excellent twist in the tail revealing that the MC was Bridget's husband- and I didn't see it coming. It reminded me of my Challenge entry "Away in a manger".