The Official Writing Challenge
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I really like the premise of your poem--your memories etched on the rocks. These are some of my favorite lines:
in sinc of life's ever
flowing dance
Moss carpeted paths
Unwinding feathering
I like the way this goes, it feels as if I have wings and I'm flitting from one spot to the next, here and there, yet still everywhere. The light airy feeling is simply wonderful! I liked the second 'verse' the best. Nice job! ^_^
Beautiful rhythm in the flow of this piece. Truly artistry in words. :+
Oh, I really like this one! The pictures you painted are both beautiful and thought-provoking.