The Official Writing Challenge
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06/13/05
Very creative entry - it was bittersweet. Great job and God bless.
06/13/05
Wistful piece with a superb wrap-up ending.
06/13/05
A very well written, well done entry that pulled us along by the heart strings of the parenting heart. Good job! I enjoyed this.
06/13/05
Very good entry. The paralleling worked beautifully.
06/14/05
This has a poetic feel, nicely done. I dread our little girl being that 17!! I pray she always stays as sweet as she is now (and our son too :)
06/16/05
I really liked this one. Good job!
06/17/05
Beautiful! We see the heart of the Father. Well written.
06/17/05
Interesting pacing, made for a nice read. Thank you.
06/18/05
What an interesting approach - comparing the seventeen year old and the seven year old from a father's perspective. Well done!
11/26/05
Six months ago when this "Of Seventee and Seven" was written, I wasn't aware of faithwriters; thus, pardon my late critique; but searching for something to read...I found your touching, delightful and heartbreakingly true to life story - Thanks! You made my day.