The Official Writing Challenge
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07/17/08
You present good character studies in your story about improving memory. I enjoyed the humor.
07/21/08
Great "hint" for your title!
I like the bantering between the couple because it's a bit more than just bantering: it actually leads to solution. Great skill here with realistic dialogue! Side note:I noticed your "bull" motto this morning on the message board and laughed. I complained in prayer this morning and needed that reminder!!!
07/21/08
Dub, you dood it again. I always love reading your entries. If you were still doing the dog pen you would have to be in it yourself with this one.
07/21/08
I really like this story. Great realistic conversation. Good work!
07/23/08
Dub, you're good! Besides that your work is so readable and enjoyable. No wonder you're a popular fixture around the boards with such writing as this!
07/23/08
LOL! I love that last suggestion with turn off the TV. that is just priceless! I especially enjoyed the interaction between husband and wife. They were such fun to read, I could see the story playing out! ^_^
07/23/08
I loved the realistic and humorous coversation in this piece.
07/23/08
Hehe. I really enjoyed this one. I've given myself that suggestion before, now if I would only follow my own advice! Great dialog between the two. Thanks for sharing!
07/23/08
Where can I sign up?
07/23/08
Funny, real. and nicely written.I like the last comment the most! Thanks.
God Bless. Elizabeth.
07/23/08
Good story, good dialog between the couple, very realistic.