The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked the advice of your mc to his brother, as well as the way you presented the hope of the Christian.
You've reminded us that our witness to nonbelievers doesn't always have to be direct. Thanks also for a strategy/example to follow as we try to move from unforgiveness to forgiveness in will to forgiveness in heart. Beautifully written.
Nice take on "memory". If this story is true, I hope Ian recovered from the blow. Enjoyed this story; you held my interest.
I enjoyed this from beginning to end. The despondent mood of the brother, and the encouragement of the MC came across well. I particularly liked the description "it was like a truce in Lebanon"
which so often describes marriages which have broken down. Well done!