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I liked the advice of your mc to his brother, as well as the way you presented the hope of the Christian.
07/17/08
You've reminded us that our witness to nonbelievers doesn't always have to be direct. Thanks also for a strategy/example to follow as we try to move from unforgiveness to forgiveness in will to forgiveness in heart. Beautifully written.
Nice take on "memory". If this story is true, I hope Ian recovered from the blow. Enjoyed this story; you held my interest.
I enjoyed this from beginning to end. The despondent mood of the brother, and the encouragement of the MC came across well. I particularly liked the description "it was like a truce in Lebanon"
which so often describes marriages which have broken down. Well done!