The Official Writing Challenge
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Your poem that illustrates how we must think on what is good in order to have good memories represents the Scripture verse well.
07/17/08
Memory is such a precious thing. It IS too bad that good memories are often blocked out by bad...Your poem illistrates this well. The scripture at the end ties it all together...Good!...Helen
07/17/08
So true. So very, very true. I had a hard time following the meter a couple of times, but enjoyed the poem very much.
07/19/08
Excellent read. I love how you tied it all together with the Scripture verse you chose. Keep up the great work for Him!
07/20/08
Great message in an easy to read poem. Unfortunately, we all know too many people who have this problem.
This is a good, thought provoking poem. I like the way you wrote it, too, wondering where the lost memories have gone.
I have one suggestion - try to keep the "show, don't tell" policy in mind. It is usually best to avoid a phrase like "The moral of this poem is easy to see".
Keep up the good work!