The Official Writing Challenge
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06/12/08
Nice. Loved the surprise ending and the subtle clues that lead up to it.
06/14/08
Very nicely done. Great descriptions, and a nice take on the topic.
06/14/08
Whoa. I had to read this through twice to see where I missed the clues. Awwww. I liked the ending with seeing his wife again. Sweet!
06/21/08
Thanks you masters for your expertise and encouragement that we writers experience from you, right from starting out as beginners.