The Official Writing Challenge
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06/12/08
I love the way this begins--a brief introduction to the main character, then a little philosophical runimation. Not many stories start like that these days; it's sort of old-fashioned, but refreshing, and especially fitting with this story.
06/14/08
I was completely enraptured. This piece is beautiful, with a lovely flow to it.
06/14/08
There's a lot to think about in this one. It made me want to know more about Anna and the brooch and the family history.
06/21/08
Thanks you masters for your expertise and encouragement that we writers experience from you, right from starting out as beginners.