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Great atmosphere and a compelling story that had me captivated from beginning to end. Excellent.
Neat twist. I had trouble figuring out how well Ryan knew her before this meeting. I guess because he's uncertain. (I think I got it finally.) But I liked how you developed the story.
At first I thought she was trying to seduce him...SO relieved at the conclusion. Great characters...awesome story.
Another great story here Peter :-)
You know how I feel about your 'medieval' pieces. You always put so much feeling into them. I'm so glad Miriam convinced him of his worth. Well done my friend.
Stories of reconciliation are always my favorite thing. I love your historical tales, and I always learn something in the most pleasant way possible.
Wow! I love the history note at the bottom. Are you developing a whole novel? I hope so .
I love fiction from this time period! Nicely done subtly revealing the past through the dialog without spelling it out for the reader. And what good dialog too!
This is one of the most unique approaches to the topic I have read. Very well done.
Thanks you masters for your expertise and encouragement that we writers experience from you, right from starting out as beginners.