The Official Writing Challenge
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06/12/08
I love this.
I like this twist on the obvious to include such a special reunion. Thank God for observant people with sensitive hearts.
Great story and well told - I loved the narrator's voice. A touch of mystery, a touch of sadness, and a big touch of love. Perfect.
06/15/08
Very intriguing from the get-go, and your ending was perfect.