The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 907 times
Member Comments
Wow...I LOVED this. Awesome take on the subject, and SO well written. Wow.
This is absolutely beautiful and tender, with captivating descriptions. Atmospheric and so visual. Wow.
Love your two characters in this unusual family. I hope they're going to be OK from now on.
What a tender story this is.
This is so good and I hope so much it places! Kudos!
Much like your previous entry, this is like a kid's story for grown-ups. I love the depth, hidden under a simple-sounding narrative. Great descriptive work makes it come alive. I truly like this new direction you've taken - so original and SO well written. And the title is awesome, too. :)
Loren, this was wonderful! I loved every single word. I would love to see this illustrated in a children's book. Just perfect my friend, just perfect.
How unique this is. You've written this heart-warming, yet unusual story in a manner that held my interest.
I loved everything about this tender story. The descriptions are very visual plus a beautiful message. Excellent, I hope this places!
Congratulations Loren on placing 11th In your level and 18th overall. Loved that story so much.
Thanks you masters for your expertise and encouragement that we writers experience from you, right from starting out as beginners.