The Official Writing Challenge
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06/12/08
Very touching story, and well written, too.
06/15/08
Moving story with a tender ending. Good job.
Being an adoptive mom of a little one who is an different ethnicity then us, I do pray she will see indeed she IS family because of Jesus and not because of anything for I know she was indeed hand-selected for our family. This was well-written.
I enjoyed this take on the topic. Refreshing.
06/18/08
What a dear story and so very well written. Many kudos!!
06/18/08
What a dear story! I liked Gran best of all, what a wise character! And Marcus was very real too, I liked his guitar playing and how it fit his emotions, that was a neat touch! ^_^
06/18/08
Very sweet (but not TOO sweet). I love the relationship between this grandson and granny, and I especially like the last line. Super job!
This had the perfect amount of sweetness and Biblical truth in it. I loved the descriptions of the guitar songs. I could hear them inside my head as I read this. A very good story! :)
Congratulations on the highly commended! It was great ending this quarter with you on the advanced top 5. :)