The Official Writing Challenge
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06/12/08
Show me the door!!!
06/12/08
Show me the door!!!
06/12/08
I cringed when they had to go back and get the sunglasses (you tied this together with the sunglasses in your ending). I laughed at the "pitty pot." I'm very thankful I never had a sister like Jemma. :) She is a riot!! You did a great job of writing with Jemma!