The Official Writing Challenge
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This is very creative, about an almost heavenly reunion. I like your metrical and stanza structure and well as other poetic elements you take advantage off (enjambment--from Jan's Master Class-- as well as no ending punctuation). I like your hope in this, "Just a glimpse, reunion seen -- It is a fact, and no dream -- One day I値l be there" Nice work on this.
I REALLY loved this...I adored the rhythm of it, and of coarse, the hopeful message. Well done!
I really like the structure of this poem, and the title is perfect. Well done.
I, too, love the structure of this poem. It's very, very well done! Kudos!
This flowed so nicely - very well done.
This is thought provoking and well done. Loved the out of box take on this topic-you nailed it.
Your title fits really well and I like this 'new style'. You did good with it and I like how it flows as I read. lovely! ^_^
I love the format of your poem - the short lines are like fleeting glimpses of the MC's experiences. My heart pounded right along with his/hers when he caught sight of Jesus. (That was my favorite part.) A lot is packed into this short piece. Very nice!
I could actually "feel" this poem as I read it. The impact of the crash, the beauty of Heaven, and then the return trip back to Earth. Very nice! :)
Love this format, love the hope at the end. Big thumbs up.
This was truly beautiful. I could feel your emotions throughout. Well done.