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06/13/08
Hehe...I loved the last line...DID TOO! Well done:)
06/13/08
Hehe - clever. Great job developing the characters, and that last line was perfect. :)
06/15/08
Very entertaining. I could see it all. Good job putting the reader in the middle of the action.
06/15/08
You brought back many nostalgic moments for me! Serves him right. Very cute moral-of-the-story tale (or should that be tail?!)
06/16/08
Oh, this is such a welcome relief in a week of so many sad stories! I grinned all the way through it, and the ending is an absolute HOOT!
06/18/08
Great title and loved the play on the Boy who cried Wolf. This was fun.
06/18/08
This is priceless. Just priceless. Many kudos!
06/18/08
ROFL! I loved the MC in this one, it was just too funny and that Wayne Junior deserved it, I think! lolz, very good suspense and characters, I liked it, especially the voice of your MC! ^_^
06/18/08
Good characterization, and using the details to set the time. I didn't like Wayne Junior much, either. Nice twist on the "boy who cried wolf" plot. And I loved the last line.
06/18/08
Oh goodness, you have caught the essence of Wayne Junior so well. LOL he sure got what was coming to him. There is always one joker in the bunch. I bet that's one reunion he'll remember. Great job Karen, very funny. :- )
06/18/08
Haha. What a little devil Wayne Junior is. I liked him a lot. :)

This story was very easy to get into. As soon as I started reading it, I couldn't stop, and I had a feeling that the fin was something other than a shark. Nice ending.
06/21/08
Thanks you masters for your expertise and encouragement that we writers experience from you, right from starting out as beginners.