The Official Writing Challenge
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06/13/08
The reaction of the family members to the invitation are classic. :) After rereading this, it all made sense, including the excuses like, "He had a lot of business to clear up before he could even think about a reunion." I like the Family Reunion and Invitations at the end of this. Your creativity is great. (I eagerly look forward to the family reunion you describe.)
06/13/08
VERY clever, with, as Beth said, classic responses. Very nicely done.
06/17/08
Although cleverly creative about hiding the Heavenly Reunion aspect of this story, I kinda got the drift about halfway through due to the large family. Very unique and a most enjoyable read! I liked it - and it says alot about how we think about that great day when the Trumpet Sounds and We will all meet Him in that cloud - both those alive and those who went before us! What a glorious reunion! Well Done!