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The reaction of the family members to the invitation are classic. :) After rereading this, it all made sense, including the excuses like, "He had a lot of business to clear up before he could even think about a reunion." I like the Family Reunion and Invitations at the end of this. Your creativity is great. (I eagerly look forward to the family reunion you describe.)
VERY clever, with, as Beth said, classic responses. Very nicely done.
Although cleverly creative about hiding the Heavenly Reunion aspect of this story, I kinda got the drift about halfway through due to the large family. Very unique and a most enjoyable read! I liked it - and it says alot about how we think about that great day when the Trumpet Sounds and We will all meet Him in that cloud - both those alive and those who went before us! What a glorious reunion! Well Done!