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I love this. The dialect is great, and the ending is priceless. Really well done.
This is really good writing with a great story line.
06/12/08
Good and country :-) You kept my attention with this one; great story.
06/13/08
Loved every word of this. Made me laugh at the same time as feeling connected and endeared to them ( is that a word? Don't care)..
LOVED LOVED LOVED it.. needed a good laugh today and you gave it to me.. THANKS YOU KINDLY YALL>..
06/13/08
Oh - I was SURE I knew whose this was, but she commented! I love the voice, and you had me giggling all the way through. A gem!
Very fun story! After all the silliness of the rest of the story, the last part seemed to be missing a little something, but certainly a great read.
06/14/08
Lots of funny stuff in here. Toad hair? LOL. I liked "Boy, you corrugatin' me?"
Very, very funny and so well written! Kudos!
06/21/08
Thanks you masters for your expertise and encouragement that we writers experience from you, right from starting out as beginners.