The Official Writing Challenge
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06/12/08
Your story had me running closer to the Lord. If that's the message you intended to send, you succeeded.
06/13/08
Your beginning is great. It slowly dawned on me where this was going. *shudder* Your writing is amazing… making this even more real and so sad to think about. You are very talented.
You have tackled a challenging setting and POV, as the reality must be exponentially worse than we can imagine. I hope this reminds us all to try yet again to reach those in our lives who do not know Christ as Savior.
What can I say, great message, great descriptions. Well done.