The Official Writing Challenge
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Your story had me running closer to the Lord. If that's the message you intended to send, you succeeded.
Your beginning is great. It slowly dawned on me where this was going. *shudder* Your writing is amazing… making this even more real and so sad to think about. You are very talented.
You have tackled a challenging setting and POV, as the reality must be exponentially worse than we can imagine. I hope this reminds us all to try yet again to reach those in our lives who do not know Christ as Savior.
What can I say, great message, great descriptions. Well done.