The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 533 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
I like how this was weaved together but it ended a little too fast, like I wanted more...that's a good thing though because I wanted to know more of what happened, you had me interested. I like this line "This idea has the same possibilities as regathering dandelion puffs after a windstorm."
~Ree~
06/12/08
There is just something about a box of pictures that transports you to another world. I was wishing to hear the wagon train story (let me know if you share it in a future writing). Your title is great and creativity top-notch. Great work with this.
You got me interested in the family! I like the way you included tiny snippest of the family's history to draw us into this story. I hope the reunion was a success!