The Official Writing Challenge
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06/12/08
It is sad that in many families, like my own, this is the only time we reunite with the extended family.
06/13/08
The twist surprised me here, and I loved it. Just when I thought he was a defiant teenager, he turns out to be a delightful but sad young man. Sad for a good reason. Loved your dialogue and description of both characters. You toook a few moments and brought me in. Great writing.
06/13/08
Convicting message - and very well done. (LOVE your mc's name) ;) Enjoyed this.
06/13/08
How very true—the family get-togethers should be a whole lot happier than meeting at a funeral. Good lesson here.
06/21/08
Thanks you masters for your expertise and encouragement that we writers experience from you, right from starting out as beginners.