The Official Writing Challenge
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06/12/08
Cool…sci-fi! This is so creative. I have, at times, entertained the thought that when we're in heaven, the Bible stories may be available for us to witness. Your title is perfect, reminiscent of another famous story. (I wish I could insert that famous 5-note melody here). I really enjoyed this.
06/18/08
What an interesting piece, Dub. And so very well done!
Many kudos, my friend!
YOu have definitely moved out of 201st place, I expect to see a ribbon on this creative and powerful entry.
06/18/08
The story was intriguing, but I have to confess, I didn't understand it. One comment at the end mentioned sci-fi. Guess if it is, that's why I didn't understand it, having never read sci-fi stories...I am just a bit baffled as to the meaning...Now, please don't misunderstand me...The story is well-told. Obviously others caught the meaning...I just want to say "good for you" for tackling this topic in such a unique manner...Helen
06/18/08
Oooh, Sci-fi! ^_^ Very creative, I really like how this is a change from the usual family reunion stories this week. The MC's voice is very realistic, but at the end I was wishing there was a little more. Nice job with the holograms, I liked that! ^_^
06/18/08
Your writing has always intriqued me. You write with such clarity I'll never see pictures of long fingered, blue skinned aliens without thinking of this entry.

Great story.
06/18/08
Wow...this is so far out of the box. What a captivating read...incredibly creative. Well done.
06/18/08
I haven't read them all, but I'm guessing yours is the only one with aliens. :) Thumbs up on the creativity and the writing - I especially like the Bible stories come to life. Only the ending seems lacking somehow.