The Official Writing Challenge
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06/05/08
A cute story, told in charming vignettes as we watch the family grow.

If anything, it may be a tad predictable and lacking in conflict, but the writing is very good, and I enjoyed watching this family (especially since my daughter and son-in-law just moved, and I'm hoping for those grandbabies soon!)
06/09/08
Love the transition from too big to too small! Just right for this family, I can relate to wanting my own room in my kid days-cute touch to this story! ^_^